Monday, October 13, 2008

Sonnet #7

Thou love me yes or no?...
Thou love me right or wrong?...
My love thee ought to know
like a singer knows a song.
My heart sings with joy.
Joy which overflows and never ceases.
Even if man threaten to destroy (my flesh)...
Love still increases!

1 comment:

Doctor X said...

Nice

BUT

1. not a sonnet (didn't we have a class on these?)

2. doesn't use the Shakespearean rhyme scheme: ABABCDCDEFEFGG

3. No context for it